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Uncharacteristically, I decided to play two versions in a row, as I was very curious about the events of day 13. In hindsight, it was obviously foolish of me to expect the entire day to be added in one update, when version/day proportion is evident. Still, I'm glad that Hibiki's amulet situation is finally resolved and the car looked great, but I digress.

Some thoughts that I forgot to mention last time:

I know that I'm in a minority when it comes to this in the AVN community, but I dislike the absence of blood during defloration. I can disregard it for Miri's case, but not with Suzu and Mana. It just diminishes the significance of the first time.

Speaking of Mana, I find it very odd that her mother isn't mentioned a single time since the rescue. Perhaps this is resolved in the next version, when she talks with Ren, but it's still weird to me.

Lastly, a couple of technical things, which perhaps others have mentioned already: Machi's profile still shows Anzou as her surname, I believe it should change to Kagekai after the topic is discussed? Yui's, Okami's and Inawyin's(her latest) scenes are missing from the gallery. Just letting you know in case you weren't aware.

Anyway, that's it. I hope you don't mind my long-ass comments.

I'm looking forward to the continuation of the story!

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Adding a whole day per update would be nice but it'd either shrink down the days significantly, or increase the development time by a lot. There will be an overlength update soon, where we go through a whole chain of events back to back, but I can't say how much longer it's gonna be in comparison to the usual update length. I assume at least twice the size, though.

The lack of blood during defloration might be a tad unrealistic, but a) there isn't always visible blood during defloration and b) I'm personally not a fan of it in AVN, so I decided to just leave it out.

Her mother is coming up as a topic in the next update, yes. There was just no point in mentioning her so far. MC doesn't have too much of a reason to think about her and Mana doesn't have any news to relay regarding her mother. Until now.

Changing Machi's last name to Anzou is actually a fair point. I had completely glossed over that. I'll see about adding that for next update.
The gallery scenes (except for Inaywin's latest one, which has been fixed for next update) are in the gallery on the in-game phone. The gallery in the main menu has been deactivated for next version and will stay that way until I've reworked it - hence it not being up-to-date. I appreciate the reminder, though.

I don't mind your comments. It's always nice to see when someone's invested in the game/story. :)

Thanks! I shall deliver more soon-ish!

Don't get me wrong, I wasn't complaining about the amount of content or anything like that. You do it at the pace that works for you. It was just a bit of a funny situation for me, since I don't usually don't play AVNs every update. However, since I was really curious about the upcoming events(Inaywin coming over for the necklace, talking to Kagome, then Kana, Kuro telling us more), I said "fuck it" and decided to play the next update. Then it ended quicker than anticipated and after staring at the screen for ~5 seconds I though "Yeah, 0.39 ended on the first seconds of day 13, so why the fuck would you expect an entire day 13 in 0.40, idiot..."

I can't say that I resonate with your reasoning in regards to Mana's mother. Considering the situation she was in, and Ren being more or less the one who got her out of it... After a couple of chats, not even a simple "How is your mom doing?". I understand that he doesn't have any personal interest in her, but a friend's mother by default should be above random strangers in the list one cares about. Extremely weird. Anyway, it's a minor detail and perhaps was discussed enough already. I say "it's strange", you say "it's not", we move on. It's not something that makes the whole story fall apart, so I don't want to harp on it more.

I do, however, beg of you to find a different model for the boar. Please.