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General minor updates. There quite a few errors in the current version. Like sometimes the nametag is wrong so the wrong character says a line. There’s a few spelling errors but most of all, sometimes the LI’s name is Aster and sometimes it is Astor.

Thank you for the update. I'll scan through and see what mistakes I can find. Besides the "Aster to Astor" error, was there any specific spots in the text where characters were speaking the wrong lines?

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I don’t remember the exact spot but I think it was in the middle of the story.

Thank you. I found the section where the characters were speaking each other's lines. I also fixed the name tags not showing and fixed what grammar problems I could find. I'll do another sweep of the script again to make sure everything is right.