Summary: I love the implementation of the story into the game. The transitions of the scenes through was well done. Would love to circle back to see the finished product. Sound design well done.
What i'd like to see:
- More interactions on the phone maybe different apps to interact.
- dream journal.
- cute little google search of how to skydive.
- other things to set the mood, maybe being able to walk around around the room before you go to sleep.
- calendar system for other anxiety-like events.
What should improve:
- Improved indication that the player is going to sleep.
- Parachute UI 'Q' to pull indication seemed to need more polish.