Let me just say that I'm glad that you were able to submit a game and I thank you for doing it! I know how difficult it is. That being said I found it difficult to have fun here:
A block of text greeting me the first time I start a game isn't a great sign and things just felt a bit unintuitive. Plus it also seems like a good important mechanic of the game is not specified in the tutorial but only in your description on the game page. Then the rain -- it just kept killing me instantly over and over and over again. I delivered a single package and it didn't feel fun.
Also, having to press m to accept packages just feels off to me. Like the game should be the one applying pressure and sending you package missions to choose from.
The WASD + Arrow controls kinda drove me crazy too. Don't get me wrong, I know that these type of controls must be super annoying to program but still, I had to ragequit.