Very cool art game, I really like the style you went for, the fast paced jazzy music is very fitting. It gives a sense of urgency while also creating a feeling of not taking the dilemma too seriously.
Here are some points on improvement I noted:
- The music is a bit too loud on standard setting, the starting dialog is hard to hear.
- Leave out the main menu options for music, etc. You are the game developer and you decide what to use, be confident here and develop your own game style :)
- Sometimes it feels maybe a bit too frustrating. Design the game in a way where you can make smaller mistakes and still be able to win. You want the player to feel good after all, right?
- Design the interface (dialog / buttons) in a similar art style as the game. This makes it look much more professional.
What I especially liked about your game:
- Story writing and art / game style.
- The humor that was used in the game.
- The main menu.
Overall a very well made project, lots of effort and thinking put into it. I really liked it and had much fun playing :)