I like the orchestration here! I think I'd look into vsts or even different methods of making the instruments sound more like they're being played by people, because I think that would enhance this a lot. Well done!
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I have a couple! My go tos for free vsts are Spitfire and the Kontakt 7 free library (Sam's Orchestra). I am a little privileged in this regard because I currently have a subscription to Opus West libraries, which is a paid one.
If you know how to write sheet music, MuseScore 4 is free and MuseSounds are pretty incredible as well.