I can see some potential with the writing but there def needs to be some musical variety with the varied amount of locations! I'd also recommend healing the party after major encounters that cause a transfer event so they aren't put at a disadvantage (unless that's the intention).
I felt lost at times with the overworld map since locations are only accessible when needed and there's not much of a clear indicator of when that is. I'd keep working on map design but you can do it if you choose ^^