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Well written and a very charming character! My main critique is the some UI elements are hard to read. For example, the mini menu at the bottom overlapping the bottom of the dialogue box, and some menus, like the Help and About having white text on a very light background. There were also sections where it felt like the game seemed to freeze, not sure if it was an intentional.

Thanks for the feedback! The white-on-white was a total oversight on my end, though in terms of the game "freezing", there's a few sections where it slows down or pauses/waits for input by design, which is something I just generally like in terms of dialogue pacing. If there's something outside of that, I haven't worked in renpy enough to know how to better optimize a project! ; w;

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Ok, then yeah it was probably a mix of intentional pauses and my computer being a bit slow. I think the biggest pause that I noticed was after the dialogue "It doesn't really matter what someone calls me, so long as they keep calling me.~"