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I finished it! I liked what happened when the power was back on. I also liked the little end game. There's a lot of rich detail, but by the time I'd finished, I realised there was a lot of repetition, but there wasn't really that many puzzles. Incidentally, I was using version 0.1.18. Here then are some more comments:

When you USE BLUE at southwest corner, "managers' module" (possessive of plural managers) should be "manager's module" (possessive of single manager).

When you EXAMINE any of the keys, there is no full stop at the end of the sentence.

Can't EAT GUM or CHEW GUM.

EXAMINE PHOTO says six persons, but uses seven colours. Shouldn't it say seven persons, as there are seven keys belonging to seven people?

In diary, "8/18 Willam turn the AI." should be "8/18 William turned the AI." I assume "AI" is artificial intelligence. Is that relevant to the game?

When reading diary, consider giving all messages in sequence, as that's how you would read it in real life, or use cycle (see sections 9.11.1-2 in tutorial). I must have read the bloody thing over 100 times to get all 18 messages.

When going north from northwest corner, it says "Need captain key". (Missing full stop at end of sentence.) If you then say USE RED KEY when you haven't got it or any other key, even if you have got it, it says "Door is already open", but door is NOT open. In my case, the west door was open, but I don't know if that's relevant.

"Activation successfull" should be "Activation successful".

Anyway, nice game. I hope you do some more.

Now, onto the next game. Aren't game jams fun?

Oh, so many comments in two posts. I will try to answer all at once a little later. But anyway, thanks for playing the game!

P.S. How did you manage to get through the game without talking to AI?)

No need to answer comments. Just accept or reject as you see fit.

I took extensive notes and will write up a solution later. I wasn't aware of any AI and I didn't talk to anyone, as there was no one to talk to. Maybe I did something related to AI without being aware of it. Perhaps give me a hint as to where the AI was (location or object?) and I'll see how I worked around it. Is it an issue if I did it "incorrectly"?

Probably, you deactivated security before using the terminal in the Captain's Cabin. And if so, you probably missed the trap scene and related puzzle. AI is one form of interaction with the Captain's Terminal. It starts with command "RUN AI".

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I think I might have missed security. Smartlet tells me security is east of the north-east corner. When I transfer my map from little bits of paper to a big piece of paper, I can see that there is a pattern and I am possibly missing one room where security should be. Smartlet also tells me a security code and security key for security. The latter looks like a regular expression. I didn't use these. I opened the grille and found the orange key, but I don't think I used it anywhere. Should I have used it at the north-east corner? There was no exit indicated to the east.

Yeah, security module is hidden and locked with orange key. Thats the idea. In the original way a player should not find a security module just by inspecting the station. Probably security module should not be mentioned in the smartlet. But then it become not so logical. I have to think what I can do with this.

At first - just a HUGE thank you for such a detailed feedback. All messages and typos will be corrected. And I'm incredibly impressed that you found Easter eggs. Seriously, I'm REALLY impressed)

I'm not very good at creating gameplay, but I'm trying to tell a good story. That's why not so many puzzles. And I have very very little experience in gamedev.

About commands like "USE BLUE". As I remember from English lessons, "blue" is the adjective, and can't be used as noun. Maybe I'm wrong, will check it.

Station team is six people, seventh key is belong to the guest. The guest just is not on the photo, because no guest is not an employee.

About the diary. Another huge thanks, missed the "cycle" section in docs and got lot of pain implementing the diary.

Jams are fun, when you have time to make and play =) Really, huge thanks for every tip. Will work hard tomorrow to improve everything.

Interesting. I wasn't aware that I had found any Easter eggs, just normal stuff. Any hints as to what they were? I did get killed a few times, but was able to rollback. Thanks for including that.

You're right about adjectives, but this is a common technique that has been used since the old days of text adventures with two-word input. For example, if you have a gold key, a silver key and a brass key, you would use EXAMINE GOLD, GET SILVER and DROP BRASS. In Adventuron, if the noun is unique, you can define the adjective as a synonym in the vocabulary table. If the noun is not unique (as in the key example above), you can just use :match "get adjective" without having to define the adjective as an object. Alternatively, you can set all the adjectives as synonyms for the noun and in your tests, use something like this:

: match "get key" {
   : if (original_noun1() == "gold") {
      // Do something with gold key
   }
   : else_if (original_noun1() == "silver") {
      // Do something with silver key
   }
   : else_if (original_noun1() == "bronze") {
      // Do something with bronze key
   }
   : else {
      : print "Which one?";
   }
}

If you want to be smart, there's actually more to it than this, but this is meant to give the general idea.

You can also try the new experimental disambiguation that Adventuron mentioned elsewhere in this thread, but I haven't tried that.

Thanks for pointing out the reason for six people in the photo. Of course, it makes sense once it's pointed out to you.

No hints about easter eggs in the game. The one you found is not the only one included. There are several others.

I meant a hint about which one I found. I may have found others, as well, as I was pretty thorough. Not thorough enough to find the AI, though.

I just realized that player can open portal (use PSTART command) without deactivating security. This is really giant bug, should fix it as soon as possible. Thank you!