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- Commandment #2 should read "Playable...".
- Commandment #4 would be more idiomatic as "There are no levels....".
- Commandment #8 has typos in the first sentence - "Flying attracts cats immediately...."
- I would re-phrase or explain commandment #9 further. Something like "Each of the characters must have their moment in the spotlight during the adventure...."
- Commandment #10 has a syntax error - "Each point of damage..."
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- The paragraph starting "Carcoris do not fight to the death." is repeated.