Ahhh thank you so much for your nice comment! And yeah i'm really proud of myself for finishing the game, even though the limits. And yeah I don't mind the rpg maker art but, sadly everyone uses it so I wanted to use my own, and yeah the progression really wack because I spent more time on the art and less on the story and balancing. Also speaking of balancing, that was really hard to do because it was either the main character got beat easily or they were too powerful, so I gave up on it because I was losing time fast, and yeeah.. I didn't really test her, I had a feeling she'd be to powerful so that's why I shoved her in for the boss since I couldn't beat him with just the main character. And about the grammar yeah! that's a pretty good idea! I'll try that! And I'm definitely gonna redo all the artwork and story. ^^