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For your first game, this is good work! You mentioned in another comment that this was done in 3 days with schoolwork also in the way. That's even more impressive!

I played it through to the end. I liked that it had a lot of original art! A lot of RPGs made in RPG engines tend to use the default assets or have a same-y look to them. Yours looks and feels unique to me, so that's a big plus. The character is cool, I like that she's a tanuki girl. The overall premise is interesting,  I like where this idea is going.

On your game page you asked for feedback, so here is goes:

One thing I found confusing was the level up/progression. It seemed like that was mostly based on picking up and using spellbooks? It felt like I went from 0 to 100 really fast. I'd probably re-balance that. The 2nd party member for the final battle was pretty OP and felt kind of random in the moment... though their help was appreciated in beating the boss, hehe. You already addressed the spelling and grammar in another comment, so I won't focus on it too much. But I do feel in an RPG/Story based game that can be pretty important. This is something I struggle with, so no judgement there, just a suggestion! I always type my dialogue in a program like google docs or Word so it at least has a baseline grammar/spell check, and then copy/paste into the game.

Anyway, nice work! I hope you keep working on this and other projects! Jams in general are a really great way to practice and grow, so keep at it! :)

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Ahhh thank you so much for your nice comment! And yeah i'm really proud of myself for finishing the game, even though the limits.  And yeah I don't mind the rpg maker art but, sadly everyone uses it so I wanted to use my own, and yeah the progression really wack because I spent more time on the art and less on the story and balancing. Also speaking of balancing, that was really hard to do because it was either the main character got beat easily or they were too powerful, so I gave up on it because I was losing time fast, and yeeah.. I didn't really test her, I had a feeling she'd be to powerful so that's why I shoved her in for the boss since I couldn't beat him with just the main character. And about the grammar yeah! that's a pretty good idea! I'll try that! And I'm definitely gonna redo all the artwork and story. ^^