Wow, major improvement compared to the first version! Everything was enjoyable. I would say that the environment could be reworked, and a way to skip the dialogues could be added. I died a couple of times at the start of the game without realizing you could save, and I got the first cutscene each time. Also I'm pretty sure it's only a problem with the resolution of my screen, but the text appearing was vertically half-hidden. Overall I had great fun!
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I'm mostly talking about the foreground: tiles are all the same, and having slopes would feel better instead of simple blocks to jump on. The could also be a variety of decorations, solid or not (like plants, desks, etc.). There could also be obstacles, like destroyable blocks for example.
Some of these suggestions might be in the game already, I played my usual 15 minutes on it, still need to continue and finish the game.