Thanks so much for playing! My slow response was due to this also being in the "Improve My Game Jam #9"!
I've attempted to improve the dialogue box and fonts, hopefully it's easier on the eyes now. It's hard to find small fonts that read well...
There is also a new intro story! This is part of a loose "series" so it had no context for a new player. Hopefully this helps! I tried something a little different for the intro. but there is a skip button for players who don't like it, haha. Also, I've added new story screens upon beating the boss.
If you do try it again, let me know what you think! Regardless, thanks for playing, and especially thanks for the feedback! I appreciate it