I have to say, I really enjoyed this! All the little details in the NPCs were great! I did both endings after the game, and they really intrigued me. I'm really excited to see what happens with Beth and her brother, and Jessica too. Also, I hope we'll get more explanation as to who the character is at the start that gives Beth the staff.
I know this is a draft, but one minor problem is the enemies. I feel like they were too overpowered and when Jessica died, I never had any items that could revive her.
Anyway, once again, this was a really fun experience and I'm excited for the future entries! :D