Feels like a good sci-fi short story, which I really like! Amazing how you fleshed out the characters, even tho we only find out about them from one person's memories. Thanks for using my sprite, she really fits here :D Now I wish I made a more diverse range of emotions for her! Also, I'm amazed how you managed to make the japanese school location backgrounds fit perfectly into the spaceship scenario, by explaining what the function of the objects shown actually is. It's weirdly clever :D