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This game is just amazing, and seriously has potential to be a masterpiece! Since you asked for feedback on the game, I figured I'd give my 2¢:


Likes:

The concept is great, it's got a lot of functionality for an early build.

The fact that the game asks you to "advertise" it is pretty cool and definitely in-line with what a "game that tries to hypnotize you" should do.

The writing is great. I like the humor and the way the game always leaves it up to you if you want to do something.

Dr. Jen Faustus is amazing, I think Pinkanator's comment summed it up very well.


Dislikes:

I'm not a huge fan of the snake guy. Extend.Unpack and Mirage Oasis's comments do a good job of explaining why.


Suggestions?:

1. More trances, and more depth in the trances. I love Spiral Clicker and always wished Helen inducted you in more ways than just the 5 inductions she currently has. Also, including "triggers" and conditioning could be fun.

2. Sexual Content? Having Dr. Jen Faustus naked, using trances to make the player masturbate, etc. would be amazing.


Also, do you have a Patreon or something of the sort where people can contribute to you? I wouldn't mind helping this game's growth!

Thank you so much! There will definitely be plenty more trances as we go on, with more trances for existing characters and more characters to come!

I absolutely get preferring Faustus over King Cobra (secretly she's my favorite too), I just wanted to have different characters to appeal to different tastes. Feel free to ignore his content as updates come, no harm no foul!

Sexual content is a probably but still a maybe! It was absolutely in my original plan, but I want to make sure the game itself is fun enough on its own before I decide to dive into sexual content. 

And for supporting, thank you so much!!! I don't have a patreon or subscribestar or anything set up yet, just because I don't know how long I'll keep at this project and others, and I don't want to nail myself to any agreements (or others) until I get some more work under my belt, and am sure about a more consistent schedule. But if you'd like to donate through itch.io, or my ko-fi (https://ko-fi.com/vinyldragon), I'd appreciate it a ton! Thanks so much again!