Okay. I might look at doing that. Or perhaps a combination of both. I know english isn't your first language but I still think you have done really well. Although I can find some errors the general meaning still gets across so you've done well.
When I get some free time I will try to go through chapter 3 and 4 of Laurents route and see what I can put together for you.
I'm loving the story so far! Great work.