Oh wow, this is your first VN? Wow this is even more monumental, considering how far you've gotten! It's like a stepping stone that jumpstarted you in making all kinds of things, I respect that! I don't know the full story quite yet, but it sounds ambitious and I'm amazed you finished development, that must be driven by so much love.
I think it may be just my phone unable to load the bg, so don't worry! I'll try it again on pc! I must discover the mystery! 😤
Don't be sorry for the issues, I find them all to be quite charming, really! It's a part of your journey in Ren'Py and that's important! Unpolished or not, I believe it's still a story worth telling, and there's nobody in this world who could tell your story like you, so I'll be happy to read it when my laptop is back from the dead! I'll comment on the game page properly next time after I finish it, just you wait! 👌