(Spoiler) Well took me few hours to finish but god damn every second of it worthed. Every ending was lovely,especialy with Hatoru. And the way Ren is presented is,well perfect ı guess? It is not to slow that gets you bored with same context again and again like many bl games or too hard to understand. But there are some things that could haven resolved better. First is Shion. His problematic status with Ren when first seen and outcomes in both way are really good but in the forest scenes beetwen them it didn't feeel like it,like it was rushed. Second problem is with Kazuya. Ren and Kazuya are foster brothers and since I am at expert how it is seen in Japan(I guess?) but with how when Ren asked Hatoru what was the problem and he said teacher-student romance may be a problem,why didn't Kazuya had problem with being foster brother? I think it could have been shown a little more? But beside that games is really good and lovely,especialy considering ıt is free (I am broke,god bless u :/) and took just a year. Well,I hope there will be more games to play but not buy,just no to capitalism.
I'm glad you enjoyed it! And yeah, we did write the game originally for Nanoreno so most of the actual script was finished in 1 - 2 months over a year ago and this meant we unfortunately had to take some short cuts here and there to wrap up the project because it'd already gotten a lot longer than originally planned. <3
We will definitely take what you mentioned about the forest scene into account for future games and we appreciate the detailed feedback. Also regarding Kazuya, it's more so that they hadn't really been foster brothers for long and rather than a brother, Kazuya views Ren more as a freeloading housemate (haha) at the start of the story and eventually as a friend (or lover, if you go down his route). They never grew up as brothers (both being almost grown adults) and Ren isn't legally Granny's grandkid the same way an adopted or biological kid would be in this specific situation. (Or at least, that's how we interpreted it while writing.) Again though, we'll definitely keep that in mind for the future and I see how it could have been elaborated upon. :)