I think this is a fun twist on visual novels but I personally would have enjoyed this a bit more if there were a few more opportunities for the player to do something, even if the theme is out of control. Like maybe have 2 different options available out of 4? Just something to make me feel like I contributed to the story a little since thats one of the fun appeals of visual novels. I do like the kinda chilling silence in the last scene, and the pop up message saying thank you in the other option, that was pretty cool! Overall I liked it, nice work!