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The game is super fun, i like the concept, it reminds me a little bit of one of my games (so extra points for that).

What I would suggest is:

  • Remove the typos counter, ot at leas hide it until the end: with the counter on, you can just type the same 2 letters, while watching the counter, and when you see pop it up, you press "Backspace" until it returns to 0
  • Don't just remove the music when you aren't typing, just lover to 10% or something (Altough, gotta admit, the audio is cool)
  • Add some feedback for when the time runs out and add the ability to the player to play again
  • Add some story and/or lore INTO the game. How would I have known that I was an orch if I hadn't read the description??
  • If you hold the same key, you'd expect to see the same character.... Well, realistically speaking you can't really hold a key in a old typewriter (You whould end up writing ony one inky character if you do so), but ogres don't exist too, so...

And, well, then there's that:

Very thorough review! Thanks for all the notes! I'll add them to my notes for future improvement! Thank you so much!!!