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Excellent story! I liked it!

What did I like?
- The story.
- Game mechanics
- Game art.
- The animations.
- scenes transitions.
- The SFX.
What I didn't like?
- This looks bad:


(Maybe add a face to the plant, it will look so much better)
Bugs:
N/A
Suggestions:
- Move how to play the game instructions, and the dialogue after the main menu.
- How to play instruction on the begging of the game, instead "Dialogue", write "Continue"
- On the dialogue, instead of writing" Press E", write Press "E" to continue, or Continue "E", or anything like that.
- Add a background music
- Maybe add a voice that calls Allen.
- Add like when the plant is talking, or Allen is talking, maybe add like 
"Alien SFX", for example, this:

(Or anything like that)
- Make the player can run, whenever I press "Shift" + (Movements inputs)

Great work! Keep making games, and never give up!

(I am sorry for being late to play, and to review your game! I forget to play it aka I played the wrong game.)

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Thank you very much for the very detailed review! I really appreciate that, thank you for these important suggestions! 

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It is my pleasure! :)