You really did a lot for such a short time. I really like the art style and the story premise of this game. I purposely am a huge fan of story based games/interactive fiction so it was nice to see. I'll admit I was a little confused at times, but a little bit of polishing could make it clearer for the players.
A couple of small things I noticed is that the text moves pretty slowly (especially for the tutorial where I was especially impatient), and speeding it up would be nice. Another thing is that I found a bug where if you click an object before the text is completely from another you not only miss the text of the second object but are no longer are able to click the object at all. I had to completely restart the game a couple of times to progress. Also the background song is nice but gets repetitive quickly (not that I can blame you, I also tried to compose music for my game and it was really hard. I ended up scrapping it and getting stuff online).
Also just want to mention A+ on the title. I wanted to play your game as soon as I read regardless of gameplay.