Well done! Great visuals and atmosphere. Was a little confusing that different gems were activated at different times? (The house gem was activated first, but the next gem I went to was still inactive.)
I loved the apparent disdain with which the character tosses away the warning notes.
The deepest mystery of all, though: what was that giant coconut behind the house?? The world may never know.
gems activating at different times came as a necessity when, during an early playtest, my friend's natural gamer instincts kicked in and they collected all the gems and socketed them in one go, completely ruining the pacing i was going for. kind of a gross fix that i tried to explain away with lore, but it didn't quite land the way i was hoping. oh well. :)!
the coconut was supposed to be a generic "sports ball" but it is now canonically a coconut thanks to you.
