I did not expect such a long game, I have finally finished it, I think the narrative is great for you, each character is different and has their own personality. I like the detail that it is your first time using gbstudio and you have achieved something like this, and that you have made the sprites and music from 0, great job, very polished and it would be nice to have more chapters in the future ^^
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We all make that mistake, especially when we are motivated with our ideas ^^ if you have thought about all that content, it is that you have not been very concerned about the amount of work behind it until you realized XD. That is passion for making games, I will follow you to see your future progress ^^ good luck