Personally, this is not my type of game, but I can see the amount of work you put into it. I can't imagine doing all the conversation logic, ontop of everything else you did in GBStudio. Hats of to you for it, that's pretty impressive. Otherwise, there were just some grammar issues I noticed throughout various bits of dialogue (mainly using 'your' in places where it should be you're and etc). There was also a line that said "grapeful" instead of grateful which made me giggle.
Some of the dialogue was really funny too, and some really made me reminiscent of being a new kid at a new school / city. I feel like you nailed the overall feeling you were going for.
Well done!
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I can understand, this isn't my favorite type of game either, just the one I felt was right to make at the time. Among the grammar mistakes I'm sorry for not catching them I was rushing a lot in the dialogue department focusing a lot more time on the visuals of the project. Also "grapeful" was on purpose, just couldn't fit in more food puns for that particular character. Thank you for the feed back!