I'm sorry, but I couldn't finish this game. The characters were not likable and the story was all over the place. This was exacerbated by grammar issues. Characters being introduced suddenly then switching to other characters suddenly makes it hard to understand, too.
It's not all bad, though! Mimics poisoning the player right at the outset is a cool concept if developed further. The initial battles aren't too hard, and the introduction doesn't waste time getting down to business.
This game might have been better if you had made it smaller and polished it more. Keep trying, keep improving!