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Heyho,

just played through the public build last night and want to give some feedback.

I think I got the most scenes and enjoyed the arts and story.
Unfortunately there are a lot of spelling errors. My English is not great at all, so there are even more I guess.
It gets distracting and can kill the mood for some people.
Everything was understandable so it wasn't that bad for me.
I made some screenshots of the spelling errors, but got tired of it the half way through.
I can send you them via mail or discord if you're interested.

Also I found a bug in an erotic scene, it stated: Image 'sex mr_friendly2_4' not found. (thats the image attached below)
The file is inside the image folder of the game, so it's maybe a coding issue.

The light blue text in the preference menu is hard to read on some spots, due to the background having a similar color in some places.
The preferences itself worked fine.

What I missed was a gallery to review the scenes or check what or where I missed something, maybe u already got that planed, because most VN have that, just a reminder.

Overall this VN made a great start. What I like the most about this VN, is that you let the supporters take such a big influence in the project, by letting them insert they're own characters and dialog. This will end in a huge and wild variety of styles and fetishes, which matches the story perfectly.
This also inspired me, for some ideas in my own project, so thanks for that! ¦3

The game is already a success! Keep up the good work and make it bigger!


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Honestly I'm so happy for you to Post a review and help me with the game! my objective is to make the game have almost all fetishes, and 100+ scenes! So a LOT of stuff. And yee i will work on fixing some issues! Some are fixed in the patreon build already! So feel free to send me a message there, I want to talk with you a little, If you have time ^^

Discord server where you can find me:

https://discord.gg/8TGJj9

And to everyone else reading this, go check out his game ^^ is awesome and will get better as he develops it! Already a masterpiece and will only get more awesome with time!