Thanks for the feedback!
Yea admittedly I'm a hardcore programmer and I have a hard time making things look good visually. I basically just went online and found some free textures and slapped onto stuff. That's definitely something I need to improve upon.
Yea it's pretty short, I had to stop early at 1 week so I wanted to make sure I at least got something complete submitted and didn't overscope. The grammar errors were probably just me slamming out a stupid story and then not proofreading it properly haha.
Anyways, thank you for the kind words!