This was the first visual novel I ever played. From now on I'll give this genre a few shots. The voice recording was really good and, as JiRath said, the atmosphere kept me engaged until the end. You could probably fasten up the build up and shorten the shower scene. All in all good work! Keep it up :)
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Makes me super happy to hear ya say that :3 I know VNs aren't everyone's cup of tea, haha.
This was pretty experimental for me cos I would normally have a player character that narrates in some way when making VN stuff. I kinda wanted this to be more like a hybrid of a VN + audio drama. I wanted the player to have some form of interaction, but didn't want any narration. I find writing narration kinda boring x3 whereas writing dialogue is fun!
I used to play those old 'choose your own adventure' books as a kid before all the fancy RPGs of today existed, so when I discovered VNs were a thing I was overjoyed cos they're like a modern day version of those books :D As much as I love VNs, I still prefer huge RPGs with choices like the Dragon Age series, haha. Oooooor, heavily story based games with choices like what Quantic Dream and Supermassive make!
Sorry, rambling on there xD
Hehe, yeah, that shower scene is 20 secs I think x3 I did debate shortening it! Wound up leaving it just because I wanted to hear the complete sound effect >.< I agree it is too long though really, haha.
Thanks for taking the time to play + comment, really appreciate the feedback :3