Like I said last week, you've done a wonderful job of hitting the mark on the tone you're going for, and the annoyance/pessimism of the characters contrasts well with the whimsy of your setting. You set up an intriguing wonderland (literally) that I want to spend more time in! Again, (I assume since you're going to continue working on it) I think adding a couple more expressive choices will help it feel more interactive, and give Adelaide a bigger role in the story.