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I love the way the choices are integrated into the text! It really makes it feel as though they're coming as a result of thinking through what Robyn wants to do. 

You set up the characters and the situation really well, through both the choices and the character's dialogue with each other.  I think you're going in a really good direction, and I want to know more about what happens as a result of saving the girl!