This felt really good! Your dialogue is fantastic -- it evokes the speaker's personality really well. I'm excited to see more dialogue from the other characters in the story. The choice structure was very fun too. I liked how you described the situation and incorporated choices into the dialogue. It felt like I was thinking strategically, which is exactly how it seems like this character SHOULD think... basically, all the different elements of the game work together in a really harmonious way. If that makes any sense. Anyway, this was fantastic and I'm excited to see the final version!