I really liked the plot and how active the choices were. Especially during the fighting choices - I liked being able to choose violence or not, and it felt like I had a lot of agency during them. Though it's true they weren't very common throughout the story - so more choices like that might help.
The world was also really interesting. I think you could definitely dive a little deeper into the lore of the city because I'm genuinely interested in it, like what Alekai said. Also, I think that you could probably split some of the passages up into separate pages, since I felt like the passages got a little bit long at times and tended to feel less like a game and more like a story.
There were a few minor spelling errors but nothing that I couldn't understand. Overall, really good job, and I had a fun time playing through this game.