It may not be finished but I like where it's going! First thing's first, thanks for introducing us to a new interactive story text editor, it looks amazing!
For part of the plot I'm a bit confused. Does Regular Girl's family have Hypertrichosis AKA Werewolf syndrome? I might be misunderstanding something there but it sounds like it. Also, is RG a product of an affair? It sounds like that may be the main reason for her mother's hatred towards her? If the reason she hates her is within the story, sorry! I'm not familiar with your story!
Other than that I'm interested to see where this will go!