Wow that was great. Very polished. Fantastic art, music, sound, and writing. It was very cute, and also had a sense of looming menace throughout. I loved that. Mira's SO seems like bad news.
I hope you finish it. I want to see what happens next.
Oh, one tiny bug I noticed is that when the text is scrolling, the words don't wrap right away (they wait until the line ends), which makes reading the text as it scrolls just a little uncomfortable.