It was such a great experience! awesome art, immersive atmospheric music and enjoyable narrative. I had a lot of fun playing it even though I was a bit tense at some point of the story, I didn’t trust those rabbit eyes :P.
Well done!
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Stardust Lingers's itch.io pageResults
| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Graphics | #4 | 4.600 | 4.600 |
| Audio | #26 | 3.764 | 3.764 |
| Overall | #89 | 3.382 | 3.382 |
| Innovation | #226 | 2.491 | 2.491 |
| Theme interpretation | #235 | 2.673 | 2.673 |
| Gameplay | #251 | 2.382 | 2.382 |
Ranked from 55 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
GitHub repository URL
https://github.com/Zelveri/Stardust-Lingers
Theme interpretation
Encountering a spirit from the moon. A journey one may never return from.
Comments
The art is just beautiful and the music sets the mood for the story. Great visual novel!
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Moon PassageExcellent work for a game jam. The story was compelling and moody, and the art and audio work were fantastic. My only complaint is that it ended so soon, and with so many loose ends!
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Launch PartyThe game was both incredibly cute and just ominous. Like you have this constant feeling of impending doom, interspersed with cute fluffy bunny moments.
I really like the writing style. The characters felt believable (to me) and the dialogues relatable.
Art's really nice too. I liked Mira's and Lune's design. Especially the latter's expressions. The text boxes and fonts fit well too.
The backgrounds are pretty, but maybe some other artist can comment on them. Like, I THINK there's something off about them, but it may be intentional (serving the tone). Like, probably they are zoomed-in to make them feel claustrophobic or something. Or maybe there's some issues with the perspective, idk. I didn't study art and I'm not a professional, so I can't comment on that. And also, art is functional to whatever you're doing, so I think they look really good, the artstyle is interesting and they work for this visual novel.
Sound design and music are really good too! Every track fits and helps build that strange mix of cute and dark and mysterious.
I was immersed in the story but it got cut short after opening the cabinet/mirror/thing (excuse my English). I couldn't read what was on it and then the game ended.
Anyways, I hope you finish the whole story and release it some day!
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ParalunarFantastic art and the music! I like it!
A quick question: was using Unity for a visual novel difficult? If I may ask, did you develop the framework for the dialogue animation and scene transitions by yourself or were there any helpful plugins or assets?
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i want to go backHey, thank you for the kind words!
We used a tool called Yarn Spinner (https://yarnspinner.dev/), which made it relatively easy.
Also has a very helpful discord community!
Wow that was great. Very polished. Fantastic art, music, sound, and writing. It was very cute, and also had a sense of looming menace throughout. I loved that. Mira's SO seems like bad news.
I hope you finish it. I want to see what happens next.
Oh, one tiny bug I noticed is that when the text is scrolling, the words don't wrap right away (they wait until the line ends), which makes reading the text as it scrolls just a little uncomfortable.
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BLOODMOONGreat artwork and a nice story that I'd love to see more of. Good animation and presentation of the SMS message exchange, something I need to figure out for my own projects.
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In The Dark and QuietThe art and music were awesome! :-)
I don't usually play graphics novels, but this one must have been a lot of work to do in one month
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MoonarchistsReally wonderful art and music and writing.
The two time I could choose between options (during the text conversation) let me hope for more of that.
Never played a visual novel before, but this was definitely a nice first one :)
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Golfing GodsAbsolutely beautiful art, and the music really completed the setting! The story was engaging and I was sad to see it end so soon, I hope I can catch the full story when it's done! I'm not very used to visual novels, but I kind of wanted some way to look at the environment in between all of the text. Beautiful game overall though!
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Moons of ZaheziaNice visual novel although a bit short and abrupt ending.
Amazing art, music and writing . Good job!
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MoonWitchesI'm invested in the story now, you'd better finish it ;D
The writing is great and the art is beautiful, really well done!
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Starcrossed & MoonshotReally cool experience. The art was great, and I was really drawn in by the mystery of the characters' backgrounds and the notes being left behind. I hope you have intentions to finish this, because I'd love to complete the story. I was disappointed that the game ended before the story was wrapped up.
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Killer Moons From Outer SpaceHi there. Great artistic touches in the game design. My only constructive criticism is maybe the possibility of having more interactions with the game. Maybe the choices made could change the flow of the story? Either way, good job.
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Moon War Z
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