Finished with rank A.
In a way it feels really co-christamassy, as that happy moment feels really bad in a dystopian world. But the story is interesting, and nicely delivered.
It feels you could give a bit more of the action context, whereas most of the context given is related to the cyberpunk setting (which is great!). For example, you start in front of the building. You could add something like "you just arrived at the delivery spot. Now you just need to enter it. Easier said than done, because sometimes these security systems will try to kill you".
The scanlines are a really nice touch :-)
Oh, and I see you only used the Pico-8 colours, and you did a great job with them!