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~~Feedback: dis gaem sux!~~

"You look more sad than usual." Correct is sadder.

"The drunkard waves Steadfast off and turns to Finn" is missing a period in-game.

"[...] like you used to do." Not exactly a typo but that last 'do' is unnecessary.

"Will is no fighter." It's supposed to be Finn.

Sebastian's and Robert's names are revealed but their dialogue tag remain 'Guard' and 'Passerby' respectively.

The very first instance of thunder lacks sound Effects.

Hi,

First: Thanks for all the feedback, truly!

I've fixed the typos and grammars errors here listed for the eventual fix patch.

As for Robert's and Sebastian's names they're done as such on purpose to kind of remove some personality from them, and put the focus on the others.

The lightning effect seems to be there, but it's a very quiet one as it's supposed to be distant. I'll bring it up a little for the next version.

Once again, thanks, and thanks for reading the story! Much appreciated!