Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Excellent point about the music - I always struggle with music choices - something didn't feel right with this and your comment is on point.
I'm very happy that you liked the dialogue (despite all my typos. Oops)! This means a lot to me. I actually had to scrap my initial plan quite late into the jam - I wrote an entire theatre style stage play for this but I couldn't figure out how to implement it using my dialogue system so re-wrote it. Again, thank you so much for playing and commenting; much appreciated!