Wow, the ending really hit hard and was a really good twist. The entire writing of all this is also very emotional, and everything hits really hits home. <3
Decreasing the time between animations might help make the flow better to increase the already great immersion! But otherwise this could really be expanded into a larger story world / RPG, the concept is great.
Thanks for sharing! I can tell this was created / written from a really deep part of you, and really appreciate you sharing that with us.