No don't stress about it, obviously it's a game made for a jam, so polishing is tough.
I will explain my point about the narration. It was fine when you do it once or twice, but since I already went 2 times, and still haven't explored everything I had to go for a 3rd time. This can lead to a narration about me wanting to exploit every possible answer, or being undecisive which I would find really fun and funny.