This was pretty fun!
I liked that you took such care to reward exploration, almost everything has loot woooot! I had so many items by the end I doubt Castalia could have walked carrying it all if the world weren't...oh! um, nevermind...did I mention I really liked the ending too?
It was a good storyline, and the cutscene interludes between sections were nice, helped add meaning to the story.
Super cool that you did your own voice acting too, that's a nice custom touch, good job there.
I also got a kick out of the Coloring Book item, and the location of the White Crayon toward the beginning was a hoot :D
All the fights were super easy, so it wasn't much of a challenge, but the overall fun factor and the story held my interest.
Nice work!