I really enjoyed this game and was impressed with how long and intricate it is. I would suggest tho that some of the intro be a bit more condensed or have a little bit more player interaction (there are four scene changes and quite a bit of dialogue before the player can do anything at all). Also, I would suggest using a spell-checker and grammar checker - of which you can find many online - to help with the text in the game. I could usually parse what you were going for, but it really hurt the emotional impact of some scenes. I also thought the beginning was a bit confusing because there's a lot of talk of terrorists but then it's zombies. It was also a bit difficult to figure out how to get into the hospital. I'm not sure if that was intentional or not but it almost seems like you climb a ladder on the ground...? Overall, tho, this was a fun and intricate game that was surprising as a game jam game just for how long and involved it is.
Viewing post in Path of Redemption (Zombie Turn Based RPG Game) jam comments
I`m really sorry about the grammar and translate i had for the game. english is not my first langauge. and i nearly hit the deadline before i can correct some mistake / glitch in the game. sorry...
the terrorism stuff will took many time to explain latter in the story.
but the foreshadow about how thats happen i put some hint on the synopsis that i put in the download page, and little bit hint when lucifer and gabriel talk about killing innocent people to save humanity.
and about how marcus instantly go to hospital room where felix is being coma. i just cut some part of the game. so it wont take to long for player to play the game.the game jam supposed to play for 30 minute. but my demo is beyond that play time. so i decided it to cut some event and go to the game play.
If you interested maybe i will update the original demo... where the story is not ended there.