I like parts of it still really early in game. Will say that I feel like for this type of story the pacing is off. People like/love you way way to fast. Now usually you can get away with this sort of thing with a more light type of novel. But there is a ton of drama early and often. So I feel like the pace Becca and MC set should have been closer to Sandra. Like it only takes a couple days and she is in love? Even Lucy seems to accept you really fast.
Of course there is a balance since this is an H game. So if you needed sex scenes earlier to fill the void I feel like should have done more with Fiona and added just a couple other girls. Speaking of Fiona, even accepting her deals it is strange cause you don't really feel like an employee you know? I am showing up to"Work" but where is the pay? Apologies if this is covered later still in chapter 2.
Not attacking the game. I actually like a lot of it and feel it has potential. Just the pacing is off for me. Having the real sad story line does not real fit well with harem stories. At least early on in them, that stuff usually fits in better later in the game once relationships are really developed and stuff.