Hey DonPuno! Thanks for the kind words and the detailed feedback. I was born a little late for Monkey Island, but I'm sure Darkside Detective (the game I was inspired by - huge recommend!) draws some inspiration from it.
About Improvements:
1. I will look into the link issue and fix it asap.
2. There is an option in the main menu option to disable animated text. Having that option in the dialog box itself felt a little difficult (working with YarnSpinner) as I wanted to get the demo out, but I am working on it.
3. That's a good suggestion, will add it in the next build!
Please follow me if you're interested in the game btw, Chapter 2 is in the works already! Have a nice day :)