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Danielle's Games3 years ago (5 edits) (+1)

Hi ZakariaGhorfati,

Would you mind playing the demo for my Visual Novel? There's now 7 chapters available. Also, just to let you know, this is the kind of Visual Novel that has one linear story. Also, the main character is shown along with other characters.

Also, this is available for Windows and Mac, as well as web browser. Also, I went and added some depth to the character art and broke the longer paragraphs into smaller ones.

You can find it at danielles-games.itch.io/i-know-you-but-how-visual-novel

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Indie Horror Games No Commentary3 years ago

Hi there again Danielle! Here is the gameplay review video you asked! I hope this helps you out. I see that you are doing well with making more new games! All the best.

In case you didn’t notice in the video, the text is almost been cut at bottom in some areas on the game! I couldn’t read it all the way down sometimes.
The graphics are so simple and that is probably your style here but I am not a fan of those unfortunately!
These kinds of games require some sound effects while playing or at least background music. Otherwise, it will be just reading a book literally!
I was hoping for a save system so I can resume the game if I ever needed to go for any personal reason! I see that there are chapters to choose from, which is nice.

Overall, the story is interesting but you really might take a look at some points above! It will help you make better visual novel games in the future.

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