Hi there again Danielle! Here is the gameplay review video you asked! I hope this helps you out. I see that you are doing well with making more new games! All the best.
- In case you didn’t notice in the video, the text is almost been cut at bottom in some areas on the game! I couldn’t read it all the way down sometimes.
- The graphics are so simple and that is probably your style here but I am not a fan of those unfortunately!
- These kinds of games require some sound effects while playing or at least background music. Otherwise, it will be just reading a book literally!
- I was hoping for a save system so I can resume the game if I ever needed to go for any personal reason! I see that there are chapters to choose from, which is nice.
Overall, the story is interesting but you really might take a look at some points above! It will help you make better visual novel games in the future.