Thanks for the feedback!
I thought the text at first would be a lot. . . In the final build, you'll (hopefully) start in a town, and the tutorials will come from fellow witches as you try to reach the Master to get your starting suit. For the demo, though, I will try to think of a way to get everything across without it being overwhelming.
Oh no! The cutscene didn't work at the beginning of the second section? I'll look into it. Where you on Mac or Windows version?
I'll tell Appa you think so. :-)
Thanks again!